What the first two lines have to do
LinkedIn truncates a post at roughly 210 characters in the feed, behind “…see more”. Expanding it is a deliberate action, and most people scrolling do not take it. Whatever sits above that line is therefore doing the entire job of earning attention for the rest.
The common failure is spending it on throat-clearing. "I'm humbled and honoured to announce that..." uses most of the visible space before saying anything. So does a dramatic one-word opening followed by a pause, which was novel briefly and now reads as a formula.
What works is the specific claim or the surprising detail, first. "We cut deployment from 40 minutes to 6 by splitting one build step" tells a reader exactly what they get by expanding. The context, the story and the caveats all fit comfortably underneath.